This is a sparse response- you have identified only a few C and Cs - you have identified the TA abut needed to starte top indicate more how the expectations of the TA shape the magazine and design choices such as font, masthead, central image and colour.
You have used some ML such as symbolises. This can be extended to denotes, connotes, and signifies. You also have not commented on the use of words, these linguistic codes are important as the banners, cover lines and text is again shaped to engage the TAs interests
as one of the actual media students from last year this should be stronger - use my advice and also the good example we analysed in class to re-draft and re-post as a 'redraft'
This is a sparse response- you have identified only a few C and Cs - you have identified the TA abut needed to starte top indicate more how the expectations of the TA shape the magazine and design choices such as font, masthead, central image and colour.
ReplyDeleteYou have used some ML such as symbolises. This can be extended to denotes, connotes, and signifies. You also have not commented on the use of words, these linguistic codes are important as the banners, cover lines and text is again shaped to engage the TAs interests
as one of the actual media students from last year this should be stronger - use my advice and also the good example we analysed in class to re-draft and re-post as a 'redraft'